They Tell Me (Expectations)

I think the flow might be off; but other than that..ehh, it's okay. Not my best, i dont think. Read&Review! :D *Note; this one has a curse word.

They Tell Me;

Go worthwile,

Always run that extra mile!

When is there ever time to rest?

They Tell Me;

Look your prettiest!

But who do I have to impress?

I'm just a little busy,

Struggling to live up to

Your damn expectations.

 

See, To you;

Things to be earned,

Things to be cleaned,

And work to be done.

 

But, To me;

Things to be learned,

Places to be seen,

And many tasks to complete;

To live up to your damn expectations.

Author's Note

Hm; honest opinions. I'll return the favor.

Reviews

[snapstache]

hahaha *Note this one has a curse word. that's why you rate it teen :) ummm yeah not your best. flow was wayy off, but what does it matter. you're expressing yourself and thats poetry and it screams SYDNEY :) so I think its just as good as the others...wait i just said it not ur best...oh well. hahahaha. Can u review...something. I don't care what :)