Stop.

Read&Review; I'll return the favor.

You should have,

A long time ago.

Because now, I know.

So say your prayers,

There's a plan being formed.

When, Where, Why.

Yes.

You shouldn't have done this.

 

And if there was a moral to be found,

In this twisted fairytale,

I'm guessing it would be;

I was never a princess,

Nor do I hope to be.

And love,

Is not happiness.

Author's Note

Hmm. I wasn't sure about posting this one. It's either really good; or completely terrible. Review with honest opinions, please. :D

Reviews

[Warick Ten Bohmer]

I'm not sure exactly how I was suppose to read this, I've read it in more than one way. I like the sound of different stanzas when they are thrown together. Every way I looked at it, it still all made sense.

It's a bit out there, unique in the way it's written. I don't think it's completely terrible, nor would I say it's really good. That;s me thinking though, I just have to Stop! :L

I know it was worth reading, I know it was interesting and I know if I had to say what it was, I'd say it was your writing, so far that in itself ensures it's going to be pretty good :)

[nono]

Love how you write!

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this was good. The setup is still interesting to me. I really liked this poem. Thanks for sharing. :)

[snapstache]

you're SO good :) nihjfa,j4brgwkebwuryhk3w (tht was a spaztic happiness thingy..i couldn't express my feelings in words so i just did THT :))
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[TeenRomance2]

"I was never a princess,

Nor do I hope to be.

And love,

Is not happiness. "

I love those lines! Reminds me of the song "Not a Pretty Girl" by Ani DiFranco.
Very good poem. Can't wait to read more =^-^=