You Liar.

You Liar.

A Poem by .SaveSydney!.
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Don't tell me,

Don't text me

I know you're lying.

I know her,

And how well she knows you.

Don't lie to me.

Don't tell me you love me.

Tell me it's over,

Please.

 

I can't take this,

I don't want this!

All of the other times I tried,

But backed away.

Baby this ended a long time ago.

And we both know it.

So save me,

Kiss me,

And say goodbye.

But don't you dare say you love me.

© 2010 .SaveSydney!.


Author's Note

.SaveSydney!.
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True in to many ways

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was an interesting pattern for the setup. It was a good write. Very strong emotions too. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like this:) I like your setup of the words...
it is a very powerful poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


poor phililili :) i love typing tht :) great poem btw
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Posted 14 Years Ago


I've felt that way before! And yes, my emotions were all over the place, kind of like the format of the poem =^-^= I loved it!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on July 20, 2010
Last Updated on July 20, 2010
Tags: liar, you, cheating, cheater, sydney, dallas, boyfriend

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.SaveSydney!.
.SaveSydney!.

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Hai; the name's Sydney. But i'm sure you figured that much out already. Hah; i don't consider myself an epic writer, it's just something i do a lot. I'm very music oriented, mostly techcore, crunk.. more..

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