The Price You'll Pay

You pushed me so far, changed me for good,

You messed me right up, don't know how you could.

Without knowing me, you judged and fought,

Not considering the hell you just bought.

 

You turned most against me, and continued to hate,

With everyone against me my life was just great.

One thing you should know before moving on,

I'll get revenge soon, just go smoke your chron.

 

I'll get back at you, one way or another,

You and your silly significant other.

 

For f*****g me up, a large price you'll pay,

Six feet under is where you'll soon lay.

You in your place, I will put,

I'll find selfness when your corpse is under my foot...........

Reviews

[Rebecca Rogers]

Well-written. I like the imagery and hatred you bring. I think at some point we've all felt this way towards someone who's screwed us over.

Nice work! :)

[shinybluestars03]

Awesome poem!
I can tell you where really hurt
by this person nothing sounds better then revenge.
Just be careful in what you do or it make come
back to haunt you.
Thanks for sharing.

Best wishes

[Clockwork]

It sends a strong message indeed. I think that this piece could be improved by changing selfness in the last line to something like strength or identity. Not a bad piece in all.

[Amy]

Wow!
This one is well written.
It sends such a strong message.
Nice work!