branden Castilo

well this was about a boy who i liked alot. and we were really good friends. but then we dated and he cheated on me...

I dont know what i did wrong

i write this all down like a song

you told me you would care

but now u dont even dare

 

dare to talk to me when im here crying.

crying and i dont kno why im trying.

everyday it hurts even more

to kno what we had before.

 

Before we decided to date

we thought it was fate.

but now it me that u hate

 

love just tought me to cry

and its you that could never try

my life sucks with out what we had

and you kno it wasnt bad

 

but i had to fall in love

i thought you were an angel from above.

we were friends forever

you said the that would change never

 

dont waste you time on me

im somthing who couldnt be.

couldnt be good anough.

boy why do u think ur so tough.

 

i wish we never met

you had my heart in a net

wrapped up so tight

so it would never fall

but then you let it shadder,

like a glass doll.

 

i guess this is it,

you said you would never quit.

but these black rivers just keep comming down my unmade cheeks

i am taking all this in way to deep....

Reviews

[Peanut]

i remember when this happened :( grawr but this was really good keep it up darlin love you :)

[prettyzombiegirl]

very good dear! keep up the great work! the more you write the better you get! Being 10 years your senior, you have a lot to look forward to so keep at it!