get out of this place

parents drinking

Someday, Sometime
I will find my way out
Somewhere, Somehow
there wont be no need to shout.

 

ill get out of this horrible place
i dont need to show my face

in time there will be no reason to cry
and i wont even have to try, try to
ignore everyones stupid mistakes
and how when everytime i tried,
all i got was heart breaks.

living with everything gets so confusing
and living with everyone can get pretty amuzing

but everytime i try to make it seem like everything is great
it all comes crashing down. is it fate?

 

Alchohol makes people do crazy things
it strikes my heart, and baby it stings

stings like lightning
its quite frighning.

 

but with all the million things in this town,
and all the million hurts and frowns
one day
and one year,
ill get my self out of here

Author's Note

ignore grammer problems

Reviews

[JD Sutter]

Well written, lots of emotion involved in this piece. I was feeling your pain here. Great job.

[Meg]

Very nice ! I liked all the emotion in it :]

[Peanut]

syd i loved it :) this was really good.

[Michael V]

I simply Love your pace in this, combined with the hot-blooded anger and frustration, this makes for a fast-paced mirror breaking, wall-punching ride....I Like