letting go

 I resisted....

I resisted as long as I could

The first time you said I love you I wanted to retreat.

But I took you at your word only to eat them in the end.

 

Promises and praises fell from your lips

Then they haulted and left me wondering

If I was so special if i was so loved then why was I so easily replaced.

You found her long before you let me go and never told me how to regain,

and its unfair in so many ways.

 

You claimed to be different only to prove your just the same

So many things I want to say yet know your not listening anymore and haven't been for sometime.

 

I'm not sure you know what love is

and that is one reason I forgive

What you've done should be unforgivable yet I find I"m wishing you well.

For your happiness I always wanted but wasn't something I could give.

 

I will find that one I'm looking for, that Id thought I found in you.

 

I've cried enough for both of us and have none left to shed.

you were my world but now you're just another who couldn't, wouldn't and didn't believe in your worth.

 

 

Reviews

[Thinker1]

Wow. That was great. The overall flow of the poem was great, but there were some mistakes. First of all, "If I was so special if i was so loved then why was I so easily replaced." has a few mistakes. One is there are no comas where there should be. Second, you forgot to captialize the i. Third, you used a period instead of a question mark. So it should be like this "If I was so special, if I was so loved, then why was I so easily replaced?" In some places, you used "your" when it should be "you're". I know these are little things, but they can really make the poem stand out. Please tell me if I was too harsh. The poem overall, was very powerfull. Short, and sweet. Just how I like it. Well done.