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“So tell me, what do you want to know about lies?”
Do I dare turn around and look at him?
I know it’s him by the way he breathes so near to me, his lips close to my neck.
“I don’t want to know anything.”
“That’s a lie.”
I close my eyes.
His hand reaches up to my neck, and brushes the hair away from my face.
He whispers ferociously, “you have no voice, you have no depth, you have no life.”
In a rage of frustration I whirl around, my fist caught in his fast hands, our faces inches apart. His eyes coaxing me, my eyes burning anger.  
“You want to kiss me don’t you?” he asks with a soft grin.
Without answering I yank my hand from his.
“You want to f**k me too” and I look away.
But the way he whispered that word stirred something carnal in my thighs. Rage turned to desire; I look again at his sunken blue eyes.
“Yes” is all that escapes my mouth before we are tying our tongues together, and letting our hands wander.

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

Uhh, good ending.

His domination, trough mind manipulation goes with the desire.

A.M.

[stipe]

you have voice, you have depth, you have life.

[Luna]

I enjoyed the dialogue here, very interesting.

And definitely racy. Which is always good!

Well done.

[Sarah]

Hm, I loved this! Very, very nice use of dialogue - you write that beautifully! I loved how you mixed the dialogue with the actual action of the story, without having one overpower the other. This was definitely a great read! ^_^

[Rachel Eisenberg]

ooh, spicy.

there's a fine line separating anger and attraction, both fueled by passion.

what zest :)

[Astrid Hamilton]

PASSIONATE;
A very surprising write; you hold back nothing with your voice.
That is the way to write.
This is the way to make passionate love;
with both.