Trust

i am inspired to wrote this because of the break up happens to my bestfriend.

In every relationship

We cannot avoid quarrels and misunderstandings

And sometimes because of this

There are relationships that didn't work

 

In every relationship

Love is not enough for this to work

Love is not enough to say that

Your relationship is strong

 

In every relationship

Not just between lovers, friends and families

This relationships requires trust

Even without love

 

In every relationship

Love cannot survive without trust but

Trust can develop into love

A relationship is strong and can survive

 

If this relationships contains love and trust

Trust is the very important thing because

Relationships are like promises

That sometimes are meant to be broken

 

Author's Note

i really have a problem on choosing the right word to use so i apologized if you find errors.

Reviews

[Joseph - Michael]

I think it's pretty good tho, but just one slight problem; "Love is not enough"? I'm sorry, I don't agree with that line and that goes the same with "This relationships requires trust Even without love" Somehow, that line "Love cannot survive without trust" had made it much better, because it's very true...

On the other hand, it's still all good tho, so no worries there...

[Enigma]

I didn't find any errors. I think it's perfect!! So true. Relationships that do survive in today's world are built up on the strong base of trust. And yes! Trust can definitely turn into love someday.
People really need to read this....
Very well done!!!

[Mr. Lopez]

A very wise message that should be shared by more people. Trust and honesty are the cornerstones to all relationships indeed. Why so many people have such a hard time being honest still boggles me. Cut through the crap and say it like it is , Thats what i think anyways. This poem did not feel forced or contrived by any means. I liked ever well placed word.

[Antonionioni]

Hi Geraldine - yes, trust is vital for a really good relationship - and so is respect. Welcome to the site - I've not been here long either!