Dreemz

A fun little ditty written for my wife

I'll be your prince of the dishes
I'll even rake your shag
want to polish up your car
with a giant lint free rag

brush your cat and your dog
until their bald or gleaming
make sure they're unsuccessful
with their evil animal scheming


With all the things you do for me
I know one thing is true
I want to wrap my arms around your dreams
and make them all come true
 

Take you out to dinner
we'll go someplace nice
and maybe if we like it
we'll even try it twice

but even if we don't
we'll recommend it to our friends
cause when we are together
The laughter never ends



With all the things you do for me
I know one thing is true
I want to wrap my arms around your dreams
and make them all come true


I'll try to be so funny
when you are feeling sad
then I'll run like hell
when this clown makes you mad

I'll serve you bacon, lunch and dinner
All right in your bed
and prove that all those fears and doubts
are strictly in your head


With all the things you do for me
I know one thing is true
I want to wrap my arms around your dreams
and make them all come true

Reviews

[LKBillips]

Awe so cute! Saw only one error. They're evil animal scheming should be their. I really like the repetition of this line
"With all the things you do for me
I know one thing is true
I want to wrap my arms around your dreams
and make them all come true"
it almost felt like a melody that way. Good stuff!

[Misterr Remeat]

Thanks for the headsup on the grammar. Glad you liked it