I Left my Soul with Him

The last time that we had met,

I left my soul with him

he will carry it around with him,

and keep it close to his heart

 

He uses his loving, gentle hands,

to carfully mold my soul,

piece by piece,

it molds together,

and creates a better person

 

A tweak here and there,

I am a more loving person,

A pull to the right, and a stretch to the left,

I am compassionate and caring,

A hard squeeze and an inspiration,

I am kinder and compatible

 

He made me a better person,

encouraged and enlightened me

with his strong heart and spirit,

I left my soul with him

Author's Note

Enjoy! Please give me some feed-back!

Reviews

[Mr_Macbeth]

I really see a spiritual growth come out of this piece. Placing a trust in "him" allowed the person to grow and become what was truly them. The potters clay is a good symbol of this spiritual maturity that I think you have captured. It is an encouraging piece, cheers.
And thanks for the review.

[karmic]

Nice job liked it. i loved the word you used and how you put them together

[Niki Disaster]

A very positive and pretty piece; it was soothing to read. There is a very clear sense of being thankful. Keep up the great work!