I am sad

when I lie down under the pool of stars,all I can think is that you didnt stay.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I dont know what to say

I never knew what to say

When I lie down under the pool of stars

All I can think is You didnt stay.

 

We walked in the rain with bare foot

we saw and felt how heaven appears

You left me alone in the middle of the road

Now I walk in the rain to hide my tears.

 

In the spring when flowers fell on my face

you touched my cheeks to sweep them aside

I am lying on the grass quiet and forlorn

where once you kissed me and held by your side.

 

On the day when we went for a drive

A tickling silence densed our love

today also a silence prevails

 ready for my peace to flail and shove.

 

Author's Note

A love story which became a tale to be just discussed in melancholy.....

Reviews

[Earthy Mumma Soul]

awww it's a really lovely lovely piece , really captured the feelings well...
it's so strange , to be so close , then nothing.. it's hard stuff to make sense of but you have expressed yourself well here in the emotion of it all..
I especially like this line
" Now I walk in the rain to hide my tears."

[Liza]

there's nothing more to add, this piece speaks for itself.

[Arielle Ann]

simple yet real...the images you created seemed to materialize into reality.