Me

Six Word Story

Born
Lost
Found
Danced
Hallowed
Ground

Reviews

[Rei]

This piece was quite unique I loved its simpilicity but also its pressure of the words. It tells a lot with a few words I loved this work of art. Thank you for writing and sharing it.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Outstanding poem! Love the wording!!

[nishantshah2381]

Aah!!!! amazing

[The Analog Kid]

This worked very well. Cool little rhyme too:)

[G. K. Bostic]

Oh, I like this!!

[Jesse N. Wall]

i've spent less time on much longer poems.
simple and blunt yet substantial

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, let's steer clear of the "hallowed ground" for awhile shall we? That is, unless we are above and not below it! There's too much fun left to be had! ( bows and offers hand) May I please have this dance?

[luciddreamer]

This is interesting...is making me think..which is good :)

Peace
Robin

[Robin]

the less labels applied to one, the more freedom within the self , I like this piece