Puma

WOTD canorous Senryu Slayers

Big dangerous cat
Rumbling canorous purr
Washes her young cubs

Author's Note

canorous [kuh-nawr-uhs]: melodious; musical

Reviews

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. oh my ... how mellifluous is this ode to the purr ... amazing ...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Tough and tender, thats what makes that cat so wonderful... very nice description.

[Lauren Beth]

Love how you make the purr of this dangerous cat seem so comforting and inviting... which it probably is to her young cubs. Beautiful moment you create here.

[Coyote Poetry]

The puma is a cool animal. Many still roam and very difficult to meet anyone who have seen a live one. Great description for one of nature gifts. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Oh, this is cute! Love it.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Oh, I love that! Mountain lions are such pretty cats...or pumas or panthers...all the same cat. A fellow once told me there was a black panther that roamed the mountains near his home. I informed him there was no such creature since the only two black cats in the world are leopards and jaguars. A few jaguars remain in the United States however so he might have been seeing one of those. But the only "Black Panthers" there ever were was a militant black organization from the civil rights era. lol

meow

[Britny_ Grady]

First off let me say not many people write Haikus so good job thinking outside of the box and getting away from the expected... Second, let me say I like how you turned something that is normally seen as dangerous and feral into a very domesticated animal... Very good job.

[Wondering Mind]

Ooo...that's one dangerous purr to be around if you're not a cub