Haunted

thoughts on old bad relationships and how they affect present ones

Haunted by the past
We avoid repeat mistakes
By missing chances

Avoiding contact
Fearful of taking chances
Making new mistakes

Only by chances
Might we break repeat mistakes
Trust being restored

Author's Note

senyru in three

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

lovely triplets in a form I love. Yes to the message (even though I'm without folt :P)

[India Brooks]

I agree with lawrence bear! Awesome piece!

[Marie Harrison]

Wow, this is very good. Glad I read this tonight. It really spoke to me. Thanks for sharing.

[lawrence bear]

awesome piece

[TTBoy28]

Haunted by the past. Breaking down the past by taking chances. I like this!