Wedding Day

WOTD palpitate

She enters the room
His heart joyously palpitates
And passing time stops

Reviews

[Tony]

Indeed it does-- like the contrasts with "palpitates" and "stops"

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. ahhh ... beautiful ... and am amazed you chose an indian bride ...

[jinjahman]

the 'passing time' is a killer line - but not literally, on this occasion

[Marie Harrison]

Beautiful poem. I can't imagine. One of my best friends is getting married at the end of this week. I know her heart is going to palpitate!

[Wondering Mind]

very lovely moment.
Then days dance away
as passing time palpitates
his heart stops the beat

Indian wedding garb is so pretty. I can see why his heart palpitated.