The Nightmare

The Nightmare

A Chapter by Norma M Sutton
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WOTD Viseral

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Heart beats rapidly
Visceral fear has begun
Ears thumping loudly


© 2010 Norma M Sutton


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Glad to see you put the WOTD to use. Could almost feel the fear in my gut. ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago
Oh, this is awesome! Terrificly horrific write!

Posted 14 Years Ago
You have 6 syllables in your first line...perhaps "quickly" as a substitute? Just a thought...

Posted 14 Years Ago

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 Added on October 13, 2010
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Norma M Sutton
Norma M Sutton

Bostic, NC



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Norma Moore Sutton has written and published two children's books: The First Lamb and Harry Goes To The Fair She has written and published the first book in the Haunting Memories Series: Matthe.. more..

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