Unpleasant Surprise
A Poem by Norma M Sutton
 One of the hazards of writing outside 
Writing on the porch
Last sip of coffee eww
Fly on tongue I feel
© 2017 Norma M Sutton
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A very sobering moment indeed!
Posted 6 Years Ago
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Short witty poem. Well crafted, Norma M Sutton.
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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'C'est la vie', porches, coffee, flies and all. Lovely senyru (or haiku?) ... has 'eww' got two syllables?
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Lol in this case 2. Long e, long u
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lol,i can relate,great haiku
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Some moments and a fly can make us wish for covered coffee. You said enough in the short poem dear Norma.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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7 Years Ago
You are welcome my friend.
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Added on July 5, 2017
Last Updated on July 5, 2017
Author
Norma M Sutton Bostic, NC
About
Norma Moore Sutton has written and published two children's books:
The First Lamb
and
Harry Goes To The Fair
She has written and published the first book in the Haunting Memories Series:
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