Unpleasant Surprise
A Poem by
Norma M Sutton
One of the hazards of writing outside
Writing on the porch
Last sip of coffee eww
Fly on tongue I feel
© 2017 Norma M Sutton
Reviews
A very sobering moment indeed!
Posted 6 Years Ago
Short witty poem. Well crafted, Norma M Sutton.
Posted 7 Years Ago
Short witty poem. Well crafted, Norma M Sutton.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
'C'est la vie', porches, coffee, flies and all. Lovely senyru (or haiku?) ... has 'eww' got two syllables?
Posted 7 Years Ago
'C'est la vie', porches, coffee, flies and all. Lovely senyru (or haiku?) ... has 'eww' got two syllables?
7 Years Ago
Lol in this case 2. Long e, long u
lol,i can relate,great haiku
Posted 7 Years Ago
lol,i can relate,great haiku
Some moments and a fly can make us wish for covered coffee. You said enough in the short poem dear Norma.
Coyote
Posted 7 Years Ago
Some moments and a fly can make us wish for covered coffee. You said enough in the short poem dear Norma.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
7 Years Ago
You are welcome my friend.
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Norma M Sutton Bostic, NC
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Norma Moore Sutton has written and published two children's books:
The First Lamb
and
Harry Goes To The Fair
She has written and published the first book in the Haunting Memories Series:
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