Among Rain and Trees

Whisked away from this desolate land of fire,
To my dreamland,of snow and life,
To rain and nature,
And though I have all of this splendor,
I am missing something of value,

Where will I go to find it?
Return to the Rings of Hell,
Just to save the sad locked spirit of you,
You are mine, and I won't abandon you,

This shade of my life will fall away,
And I'll be ready for you, and your beauty,
Come away my love,
Come with me,
And never again will they hurt you

Reviews

[HipsterPrincess17]

Nice poem but I was a little confused here and there. but then I understood what you were going at. Practice makes perfect!
Your friend, Lia