Lost Innocence

Tragic circumstances faced by young child..... Unfortunately very common.

If only I knew that feeling of bliss, Of being tucked in every night, with a kiss. My tummy and also my heart feeling full Can you and my daddy make that possible... Tomorrow, I promise I'll try to be good, So I won't get punished, I know that I could. And I'll try not to cry, and I'll try to be strong, Even when Daddy does things that are wrong. But I guess I deserve it, I must be so bad, For making my mommy and daddy so mad, That they have to go out and leave me alone, I am so hungry, wish grandma could phone. Be brave little girl, I wish grandma could say, I'll be there to come and get you some day. And I'll buy you new shoes, and a brand new pink dress, That will make you look like a little Princess. But I know Grandma's gone, and she's not coming back. Why do they die, God, what is a heart attack? Tonight I'll kneel by my bed and I'll pray, That "the lady" won't come and take me away. Mommy, I love you, and I love daddy too. I know you can't help all the things that you do..........Barbz

Reviews

[Rahul Chhabra]

The poem is actually beautiful. It could be improved with the right formatting. The words do resonate within me. It reminds me of my honest childhood.
That is, exactly true mark of a great writer. The one who can write what all feel is the supreme goal of the entire literature.
Good luck. Happy writing. :)

[Border]

Madam'
I was very fortunate to read your well written poem on the trials and tribulations of childhood.
The hopes and fears of a child have been expressed well
please keep writing and spread happiness
stay happy
regards

[Simply Divine Creation]

This Is Amazing Barbz..:-*

[nicole_smith]

Wow, this is beautiful. Thank you for sharing

[sandpiper66]

A heart-wrenching account...very beautiful and minimalistic...so powerful.