My Loud Heart

Young love through shadows...

His shadow was behind me

I  could not turn around.

Just the thought of seeing his face

Made my loud heart pound.

 

His shadow was beside me

Silhouette of his body next to mine.

I could feel his breath upon my cheek

Sending shivers down my spine.

 

His shadow leaned in closer

And stayed just like that, posed.

Suddenly our lips were touching

But by then my eyes were closed.

Author's Note

Enjoy :) Let me know what you think.

Reviews

[Emilie Barn]

I really enjoyed it! Nice job =))

[Chip]

Very good! exactly how a kiss should be. :)

[Angelic Surrender]

I love it :) Great piece