Corrine's Song

A friend of mine believes her boyfriend hits her because she was bad. This is my song for her.

I wish you’d open your mind

And see that this is all wrong

It’s not your fault honey

Stop thinking you’re a bad girl

You didn’t earn this

And you didn’t deserve this

Believe me when I tell you

This needs to stop before he kills you

 

Your broken ribs and bruises

Evidence of his anger

Each one tells a story

Of how he’s too controlling

You did nothing to earn this

I swear you don’t deserve this

I’ll put a stop to it

Before he kills you

 

You’re such a sweet girl

He doesn’t know what he has

I wish I could stop what he’s doing

Sweetie if he rapes you again I’ll kill him

You're too good for him

You never deserved this

If it’s the last thing I do

I’ll stop him before he kills you

 

Honey you didn’t earn this

You really never deserved this

Believe me cause it’s true

He better stop before he kills you

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Well I can see this is directed to someone, not sure if it is a love or a friend. Nice Job

[Sweet Emotions]

It was directed to a best friend. I call everyone sweetie.

[MLMFMD]

I know i don't know you or your friend but i feel like i should tell you to save her before its to late,If you lose her it will ruin you in a way.And her boyfriend seems like a really bad person but there has to be something within him that trigers his anger..Please don't let him take her life before she has even lived one.

[NaCl]

No one deserves this...ever. I honestly love this. It sounds so tender and caring, not forceful or loud. It has a strange sense of calm.

[Dr. Kittin]

So sad and really touching. I hope for you and your friend that whatever's going on does indeed stop before someone gets hurt, or, God forbid, killed.

[Dark Angel ~]

Aww. :'( No one deserves a 'boyfriend' who hits her. It's not right.
This was sad, but very pretty, good job. :)

[TJ]

One of the sadder pieces I've read describing an all too common situation. Some are so eager to find love an acceptance they end up in such toxic situations. It's very sad really. Especially from this point I view; you want to help them but until they help themselves there's nothing you can do

[rinxx]

ok...this song is about me and i love you, youre one of my best friends, but honestly...im fine. hes fine. he doesnt mean it. and its not his fault. please stop worrying. ok? i can handle myself.

[VelvetRosetta]

Sad and heartfelt, abuse should never be accepted.

[d]

this one makes me want to hear the music part. there must be a tune to this but i can tell what sort it would be. its a scary thought, one i hope is not true though i know it is. i hope she can get away on her own. what melody would that be? i hope there's a happier poem also. i don't know what else to say.....

[RedInk524]

No one deserves that.