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Sweet 16

Sweet 16

A Poem by Sweet Emotions

Party dresses sparkle

Sweet 16 balloons lining the wall

The girl, she danced

Danced like there was not a thing to worry about

Sailing, soaring around the floor

The other girls danced too

But they looked like crows

Next to the flamingo

Dressed in blue

If only I’d had the courage

To ask for her name

© 2013 Sweet Emotions


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This was simple and sweet. Brings back some memories and that's the best kind of writing :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago
ahha that's awesome I like it!

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Posted 11 Years Ago
A very sweet poem indeed.

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Posted 11 Years Ago

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 Added on February 2, 2013
Last Updated on July 11, 2013

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Sweet Emotions
Sweet Emotions

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Liz. Female poet / song writer. I don't wear matching socks. I love hugs. I love taking pictures and just started a photography blog. Any inspiration for writing you want to give me would be great! more..

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