Alice

This is partly inspired by Lewis Carroll's "Alice's Adventures in Wonderland."

She slipped and fell into

the narrow passage of

despair

The curved tunnel blocked out

the light

As she slipped away

the smooth walls gave no support

Not a ledge of hope to grasp

Hands at her sides

she falls freely

waiting to hit the

bottom

Reviews

[Confessions of an Addic..]

loved it, loved it, loved it!

[Veronica Chandler]

There seems to be a wealth of information in this powerfully written little piece...I enjoyed the read very much.

[Brave girl]

beautiful peom,i especially like this line " she falls freely waiting to hit the bottom" there's a hidding meaning here :)

[d]

i see a hidden meaning in this poem which seems to be what this poem is really about. i guess that that is why it is so good

[Tory]

I have one question: what is your form doing? Otherwise, I like the prepositional alignment and the imagery

[Sarah Emily]

Lovely.

[_]

Oh my, I'd frankly be quite scared to hit the bottom. This reminds me of Kiwi:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g0G9vDKcdLg

I loved to poem! :) It's beautiful :D

[Kiari Sabon]

it was very nicely done keep up the work

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Wonderful play of words, dear one. Dark, with vivid imagery.