Feel it

Beauty is erotic,

Rough around the edges;

A draft of something that will be great.

It is simple, unique,

Defined by the creator.

 

It is unpredictable;

With an amazing story behind it all.

It has feeling and life,

A hidden meaning meant to be sought out.

Or left to the imagination.

 

Beauty is not just seeing,

It is believing;

It is feeling.

Feel the heartache, the confusion

The message that is silently screaming.

Feel the beauty here.

Reviews

[Jeff Bresee]

...and is so often times, invisible to the eye.

Nice work so as to make me think.

[Dani California]

Yes, true beauty resides within... indeed.
Where it can be felt , not seen.

This is a wonderfully penned poem!

Beauty is not just seeing,
It is believing;
It is feeling.
Feel the heartache, the confusion
The message that is silently screaming.
Feel the beauty here."


This sums it up quite well, and what a perfect ending!
"Feel the beauty here" Bravo! Nicely done!!

[ShanZ-Turn]

wow, powerful. I really felt the "call" out of this poem. The way you described beauty was truly well done. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Ah, yes. You described beauty, but I think you also described love a little as well. A good poem. I don't think I love this one as much as the other two you entered, but very nice, as always. This is why I always make sure you know about my contests!!
KH