half- crazy with the reality of it

1. the sky

is unimaginable in

it's lucid vastness

as kaleidoscopic clouds

skip across that

cliché post- card blue

under which I am going

modernly insane

2. these trees

they speak to me.

whispers in my hair,

and teases me

with rambling

codes of rhymes

and riddles.

I speak to them,

my woes, my sorrows,

happiness,

anger,

and most of all those trees

have absorbed my pain.

I feel their hearts,

I taste the bark,

I count their leaves,

and I am half- crazy

from it all,

full of praise!

3. swirling, tumbling,

wildness in constancy,

and when

the sun shines on

this river,

it is a rapid,

solid, pure rush

of golden light.

this blinds me,

but I do not look away.

my mind is blind,

but my heart is not.

4. who am I?

what am I?

5. I simply am.

existing only within

change, yet

without changing

at

all. I am just within

my reason.

vapid as

a new thought.

6. I am.

I am relentless.

Reviews

[vaishnavi]

best poem i have seen till now
only i like some changes that u could make
in the 5th point I simply am. instead u could make

I'm simply me
existing only within
trying to be
just me and free

or as u like further... that just that 1st line dosnt sounds good
although it is a good poem to read there should be more rhyming words to give a good poetic effect
by the way it is a fabulous poem i like it ^_^

[sweetbuddha]

Thank you. I am not very good at rhyming lol, that's why I do free verse style. Thank you for the constructive criticism :) I appreciate it

[vaishnavi]

your welcome keep on writing and sharing

[Justin]

that was really great, i can picture it in my head everything, trees are really pretty, especially during the fall!!!!

[sweetbuddha]

Yes the most certainly are! Thank you for reading, Justin :)

[Justin]

your welcome, it was done really well, trees are something that can be made into anything

[sweetbuddha]

Mmhm :) thanks again

[Justin]

your welcome, keep it up :)

[Chris Micha]

This is beautiful. Took me back to my childhood when I would climb every tree I saw.

Your imagery is great, too. I could see you in the tree in your craziness of thoughts.

Bravo! :)

[sweetbuddha]

I love trees!
And thank you very much ^_^