Infinitely 2

Infinitely 2

A Poem by Rachelle
"

Glad you are safe.

"
We could sit here all day
Watching ant trails and crumbs
Or skip stones in the pond.

And not utter a word.

© 2014 Rachelle


Author's Note

Rachelle
no words. just relieved.

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Sometimes it is enough just to be .This is so wise and amazing in its simplicity :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Vidya!
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Glad I "see" you smiling here...

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Salamat! ;D
true ..... well done !! loved the read

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Ahena!
This short piece captures the feeling of just enjoying being with a person whom you love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, KL!
Gentle, peaceful, and resonating with the quiet, mutual love between two people. What better way to reveal a love than to admire the things they love, together? I enjoyed the atmosphere of this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Taite!
Silence of the two into infinity in absolute love. I love this. Powerful in short lines...:)............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:)....................
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Kal
Deep thoughts that are well written.. So simple yet so meaningful..

Once again.. Well done and keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Ayssak!
This says so much in so few words, it feels awkward to leave a review with long lines of praise. I'll just say that this is going in my library :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by, Doc!
Infinitely 2 forced me to reAD Infinitely 1.......gud one ......

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
Utkarsh Singh

10 Years Ago

welcome....
sometimes it is better when there is a comfortable silence, and two people can just quietly appreciate each other.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Rachelle

10 Years Ago

Thank you, sir!

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Added on April 18, 2014
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Rachelle
Rachelle

Carmel, IN



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