Life for me

Fighting-igniting my fires-scream the tires against wet pavement-and eyes are vacant-in the lines of my cure-im pretty sure i never loved you-Show the truth and now i got my proof-design a quiet place to hide-and -never let anyone in-this skin is my canvas-and if i could id inject the skin for a lifetime of suffered symbols-please excuse me as i step again to ledge just to know it still exsist-but id never attempt-breathe for another breathe-the story of our lives have a need- i got diseased-this should of never been me-but its what i see when i close my lies to the blood on my hands-these tracks are fading-and im fighting against the basement-let me live-let me in-once i feel the need to forgive i will give all that i can

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[Ghost of Jupiter]

Nice... i like the way your formatted this piece, it made me read it like a rushing avalanche of emotion. Especially loved these lines:

"never let anyone in-this skin is my canvas-and if i could id inject the skin for a lifetime of suffered symbols-please excuse me as i step again to ledge just to know it still exsist"

pointed and prolific- Skillfully scribed.