Reality - Joe's poem on the birth of his son Alon

Reality - Joe's poem on the birth of his son Alon

A Poem by swati

The reality of vulnerable

 

is the fear of being seen

 

without the masks that keep the world away

 

from our demons and our deams

 

But to stand tall and naked

 

before all the world to see

 

without shame or changes

 

for our flawed humanity

 

This is the path to self

 

our shield from words that sting

 

This is the strength of vulnerablity

 

and the pesce that it can bring

 

So stand tall and naked

 

before all the world to see

 

your outstretched arms holding

 

all your demons and all your dreams....

 

© 2008 swati


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one misspelling
you said
I think you meant Peace
other than that it was a terrific write

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on July 22, 2008

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swati
swati

cape town, South Africa



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hey im swati, im 23 yrs old and am a medical student, although med takes up most of my time i try and read whenever i can. Ive only written poems till now but would like 2 venture into short stories .. more..

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