My Journey Of Life

Some moments of life are spent best with friends...here's one dedicated to all my friends..

I sit back and think of those day,

When speech and words I never could say,

Fed and cared so well by all,

Slept in a cradle four feet tall.

A few months later I started to trot,

Falling and Trying but never gave up,

This journey went by so fast,

I reached school at three and half.

Found a bunch of the same type as me,

'Friends Forever' they grew up to be,

Twelve long years together we spent,

Knowing each other at our own pace.

I now feel how limited were the days,

Where enjoyment and fun was unlimited,

Let me relive those moments once again,

This time I won't let them in vain.

Now into the race of life,

Restless am I to survive for thee,

Killing myself to find the leisure,

To meet my friends, near and dear.

I hope to find the time someday soon,

To sit together and let memories bloom,

Something to stay fresh forever until my grave

And from there I'l smile and say "I lived for my friends!"

 - Swateek Jena

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I wonder why the lines rhyme sometimes every line and then a stanza later, they don't rhyme at all. Strangely, they blend in perfectly with the whole poem. Great write about life, and it is true that time passes by so fast, all we can do once that moment is gone is sit down and reminisce. Wonderful poem Swateek, keep up the good work!

[natzky]

it's very good, it makes me remember of someone' way back in high school....heheh

[Swateek]

@Tai...doesnt it happen that at some time...ur life is at a high...it comes down again to surge further...like the high and low notes on music scale...both blend well to give u the taste.. :)