The Journey towards Infinity

Thoughts would end but the infinity wont... Hearty Thanks to all Readers and Reviewers...

I sauntered by,

envisaging to descry the tryst of Time and Infinity,
But the fact engulfed my envisions,
i acquired that it was of sheer inanity.
The scant ZERO expounded infinity as i ambled along,
I ceased, knowing the Infinity will shrivel the hands of clock,
With Mankind,even the Time would eventually knell its last dong.
Furthermore,Into the realm of deep aqua,
i exhumed the ground,
coveting for the cessation,
As I went along,

i glimpsed the same somber space,
Infinity smote on my Cerebration,
I could not prophesy the Infinity which was Unleashed and unbound,
I transpired,

the journey towards infinity was more perpetual and profound.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The tryst of Time and Infinity. Such a interesting topic to ponder upon. I like the places you took me in your poem. Would be cool if we knew the future. I believe we need to learn from the past to make less error. New journeys can lead us on a twisting ride. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[WhiteWillow]

This piece inspires so many thoughts which can make one's head spin. Infinity, time space, existence, always, never. Deep and profound, a wonderful write.

[Lina Grey]

An intriguing poem. I like the sense of truth it has and the unusual language. Very deep and well penned. Thank you.

[Raven Starhawk]

It has a grounded sense of truth to it that I am enthralled by.

[Dayran]

We sometimes engage a curious place in us that seems to speak of things that last forever. In reality few things do. And the shock of discovery is quite considerable. As we grow, the experience will accumulate, until we are very distant from the experience of infinity. Nice write!

[Irfan Bashir Shah]

well said by Chris....
A journey to wisdom...... i would say....

[J Todd Underhill]

This need some touch up, but it's a deep thinking piece for sure.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is magnificent!... has a tone of passing through time to another level, "infinity"...
A passing to another dimension... life after death? -a least that is what I envision when reading this. NIce write!