The Journey towards Infinity

Thoughts would end but the infinity wont... Hearty Thanks to all Readers and Reviewers...

I sauntered by,

envisaging to descry the tryst of Time and Infinity,
But the fact engulfed my envisions,
i acquired that it was of sheer inanity.
The scant ZERO expounded infinity as i ambled along,
I ceased, knowing the Infinity will shrivel the hands of clock,
With Mankind,even the Time would eventually knell its last dong.
Furthermore,Into the realm of deep aqua,
i exhumed the ground,
coveting for the cessation,
As I went along,

i glimpsed the same somber space,
Infinity smote on my Cerebration,
I could not prophesy the Infinity which was Unleashed and unbound,
I transpired,

the journey towards infinity was more perpetual and profound.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The tryst of Time and Infinity. Such a interesting topic to ponder upon. I like the places you took me in your poem. Would be cool if we knew the future. I believe we need to learn from the past to make less error. New journeys can lead us on a twisting ride. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Manpreet]

Amazing work.

[Reeti]

So, there is no end to the end of time (until the day of reckoning in case for ourselves). I enjoyed how you explicated the contrast between Time and Infinity. There is an ineradicable entanglement between the two, with Infinity being the most substantiated and also complex to perceive. This is a mystical piece of work reflecting over what man cannot ever wield, be it past, present or future.

[Amila Jay]

envisaging to descry the tryst of Time and Infinity, an interesting write:-)

[Sahar moonlight]

A journey towards infinity.
That was so interesting!
Thanks for sharing

[Arielle Ann]

the journey from zero to infinity..time and its cessation..we as Indians should take it up...good idea to ponder upon!

[Cassie Fraga]

hhhmmmm... interesting... very grounded with existence, nice write my friend!!

[Pi Cee]

Infinity...just something to think on.
I like this peice, as I'm sure others do and will. Good write. Keep on.

[Thea]

Very interesting...You've chosen some great vocabularies in here...Well done...
:)))

[TheSweet]

Anything that twists time and space to a cryptic and well phrased piece gets my vote. Thanks for sharing :P

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

I was in awe by your phrasing and wording, such a profound piece that left my mind filled with ponders of thought, excellent poem!