Utopia

A simple 'Acrostic' - the first letters in each line spell out 'INTROVERT'; which is what the poem is about.

It's in my castle, where I now hide, braced by the seamless serene,
Neath the smiling heavens, a blushing sun, while the mountains bow at my feet,
'Tis here I lurk, flourishing my wand, stoking the flames of desire;
Raising my blade I scare all demons, slay dragons that breathe fire.
Or saunter in circles through green and grey, a pillow of winds in my trail,
Voids I fill with glaring ease, in carefree nonchalance,
Eternally held beyond the rusty realms of crude reality,
Radiant with tender glow of flowers saved to blossom n'grow freely,
'Tis there I belong, sheltered by, sweetest melancholy...

Reviews

[Angel]

Very interesting choice of words and how you have those details makes the poem in my opinion even more strong. I love your title for it, that's what really drew me into reading this poem because of what the word Utopia meaning is. I'm glad I did cause this is really good. I hope to see more.

[Pash]

I loved the ride your poem took me on. I could visualize every moment of it. Colorful words with seemless flow and warmth. I enjoyed it very much!