Bobby D and Edie

Bobby D and Edie

A Poem by Susan Michelle

cigarette taste

peppermint tongue

and the dark circles

under your eyes.

they make the brown

in your irises more

pronounced, like a

period at the end

of a sentence.

I know you wish

things could change;

it's eating you whole.

keep your hair in your

face and the scarf

around your neck.

you look like

Bob Dylan.

I wish I was Edie.

 

© 2008 Susan Michelle


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sad. Sorry. It just made me sad for them. Like looking at a high school friend I once had when I seen him years after school and drugs had destroyed him.

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Susan Michelle
Susan Michelle

Morgantown, WV



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I'm a double-major at West Virginia University, concentrating in International Studies and English. I love to create new things and express myself creatively. I love to write creative poetry. I am mys.. more..

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