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You want to forget but, somehow you just can't

It seems so impossible

 

He seems like your home

He tells you he loves you

You gave him you heart and everything you have

He goes on to tell you that this has to stop

He loves you like a friend and nothing more

 

As he walks away you realize that he completes you

He makes you feel whole

He walks away to another girl

 

Someone that deserves him more

Someone that needs him more

 

You ask yourself who loves him more?

Who needs him more than you?

 

Someone comes up behind you

Taps you on your sholder

 

You turn only to see another guy, a friend, with his arms opened wide to you

As he's comforting you, you think "why didn't I see this before?"

 

He loves you more than you can comprehend

You can only imagine that you could be the someone who needs him and deserves him

You feel something that you haven't felt in a long time... Love

 

It's the most unforgetable love you can imagine

His eyes say it all

He loves you, wants to hold you in his arms forever

He wants to be one with you

 

For once you don't say wait

For once you don't say this doesn't feel right

 

You know in your heart that THIS is right

This time nothing can go wrong

You've found your home

Reviews

[Annie]

Interesting...Rather insightful as to what may be going on in your life right now. I like it...Reads well. I love that it's in third(or is it second?) person. It gives it a unique voice. Great work.

[Jake Martin]

Great poem about love, and rediscovering that love after it left you.
I like the rhyme scheme.
Solid, good read. Keep writing, want to see more from you!!