Soaked

Soaked

A Poem by Suzuki Writes

i’m soaked
with thoughts
and more
thoughts
and with feelings
and I can feel
the minuscule atoms  
of these monstrous waves of emotions
taking me into -
sinking me into - 
drowning me into -
the sea, and i see
but more, feel
vibrations throughout my
being
so i take a breather
of the salt water ocean
swallowing me deeper
and deeper
and gone.

© 2012 Suzuki Writes


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I like how you use the ocean as a metaphor-great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nice poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Suzuki Writes
Suzuki Writes

Grays, Essex, United Kingdom



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