Awakening.A Story by Suzuki Writeslove, death and the mafia.Pitter … Patter … a hint of
rain. Thunderous raindrops ripple the land, echoing
through the demoralizing atmosphere. Concurrently, time freezes for him. The hemisphere of chaos shelters
the city; an invisible
barrier. Her eyelids slide to gracefully fall, to declare the end
of her curtain call, and
with an exhalation
of the conclusive breath… he finds her laid upon her death. Her heartbeat diffuses... faints away. Then stops. A rainstorm encloses over his city to
display Nature’s mourning. Distortion accompanies the rain.
The vibrant traffic jammed main road
fades into a deserted land; the sky
reaching buildings shrink into deformed
dead trees; the concrete sidewalks corrode to dust. The city thrives in its isolation as a monument attracting pedestrians beyond the
opaque barrier. As the rain washed away
the stickiness from his
skin and the
aroma of rusted
metal arose, it made
him aware again. Jolted out of the haze, he screamed.
Screamed as his throat burned. Screamed with hatred. Screamed… for vengeance. The commotion causes consecutive questions to linger
through the mindless
bystanders. The cowards
observe Caiden lamenting
on the deserted
road. Gusts of
wind roar furiously as the crisp autumn
leaves soar in
preparation of retribution.
Above, the angry
clouds crease with
thunderbolts, glaring with detestation. Relentless reiteration from the
gunshot runs through
him and down
pours grief from his
eyes. He rests his
hand upon her
gentle cheek to
feel cold begin
to slither into this
palm. Ultimately, the penetration from the
fangs stun him as it sinks
into his skin
to drown him
with the poison of
the iciness from her
corpse. He holds
her limp rag-doll
body in his sturdy arms
of protection which failed
at protecting the most precious
thing… her. And just like that,
she was gone. 2010. The late summer was filled
with the aroma
of pine trees
fluttering ever so
freely among the
crisp auburn leaves.
Sat
on the concrete doorsteps were the
two, both in
their youth. The tomboy
sat cross-legged in her olive green
quarter lengths and an oversized T-shirt, awkwardly comfortable at her new vicinity.
Beside her sat
the kid from
across the street
arguing, Undertaker was more
legend than Triple
H. It was a time prior
to pain where life
hadn’t corrupted their hearts
yet. 2015. An alarm rang
somewhere distant as the sun rays melted
the sleep from
her eyes. He still hasn’t come home... Oh, but he had. In
frustration, Samina
stormed out of
bed to catch a
glimpse of glistening
on her side
table. A rectangular
golden box neatly tied with a red ribbon
and a bow. She instantly knew. Throwing a faded
Nike shirt over
her head, she indulged
herself in what
was left of
his scent. Her body physically
craved for his
presence on her seventeenth birthday. Aggravated but hurt,
she leaned over and grabbed
the present. The lid
was taken off to reveal luminous
golden rays but in that instant,
she was colour-blind.
It remained true to
what it was in her eyes: a
present which had cost
someone their life,
or drug money.
Either way, it
was dirty money from his
dirty business and she
despised it. In a sea of rectangular
velvet rested a
golden necklace, without its shine, perfectly
in place and hanging
on it was half a heart that read,
‘Together.’ The irony.
Stuck inside the
lid was an uneven torn
lined paper with
careless scrawling; the subsequent birthday present. Sammi, Leaving "
gotta take care
of business. Didn’t wake you, had
no time. Happy b-day,
enjoy the present. Dunno when I’ll
be back. -C She instantly knew; the business
had taken over his life. Not only that, but
her
life too. When did it begin? It had always
been there but deep inside, she prayed her love could
conquer it all.
But it didn’t.
Money was always
his motive and dealing was the
way forward " for him. He
spiralled recklessly out of control but the
money kept coming
in. Caiden made
it clear she was
not to interfere
with the business. So she didn’t, afraid his
love for money was greater
than for her. Dragging herself out of bed, she
got dressed for her
jog. Quickly shoving the lid
back on and the box
into her top
drawer, she tied the
long ebony black
hair into a ponytail, grabbed the key,
iPod and left. Not noticing the black
Benz parked down
the road. She jogged, with Caiden
on her mind.
Her speed increased;
she started running, then sprinting.
But she took
no notice of the burning sensation in the back of her legs or
the dryness and the
hint of blood
in her throat. Their lives had
succumbed to his business and his
dreams of running
the streets. She got to the end
of her road
and stopped. Her chest
caved in, gasping
for breath to relieve
the strain on her muscles. Arriving at her building, she found
the entrance windows had been
obliterated. Like someone wanted to
break in. “F**k.” Adrenaline surged into
every vein as
she burst through the door
and sped upstairs
like a roadrunner.
Unintentionally, she sped past
her apartment and desperately
clutched onto the next door to
stop herself. Nearly crashing
into the plant, she
was reminded of the baseball bat Caiden
had hidden in case
of emergencies. This was an emergency.
Carefully reaching behind, her grip firmed
on the bat
as she made
her way towards her door.
With caution, she held
the doorknob and turned.
The abrupt thought of myriad
subsequent scenarios awaiting to steer
her to death
stunned her in fear. Her
heart thrashed against her chest. She
lost her senses; she smelled
danger, tasted fear,
heard chaos, saw
disaster waiting to unfold and
held tight to
her weapon. It refused to turn
" the door was still
locked. Relief washed over
her as she unlocked and entered
her apartment. Regaining herself, she felt
the tranquillity flowing through the room as
everything remained still in
its place. Paranoia
had become a friend; she was
Caiden’s girlfriend, after all.
She became the
perfect target; they all
wanted to hit him where
it hurt so
they came after
her. She made
her way to the window
and like a magician, unveiled the world to her apartment. At a glance, a couple
caught her eye… a normal couple. Her mind was drowning in thoughts
of Caiden when she heard the
door click shut.
The momentary thought of Caiden coming
back was rammed aside as terror
chaotically overtook her. From
behind, a hand clamped over her mouth as it jerked her
head
to one side. In a swift movement, her head
was yanked the opposite
direction and that’s
when all went black.
Hazily awaking, the rope
burns on her wrists tingled
with flames and
her shoulders felt wrenched out of their sockets.
Her temporal pulse hammered
against her flesh.
She saw the
two sharp figures
sat before her as her vision recuperated. Samina’s eyes widened with fear, and then
squinted with rage. “You.” There sat the
Mafia King and
his Right-Hand Man. Impotent and alone,
Samina’s rage was subdued with abrupt fear. The two most
fearsome notorious men renown
for their murderous
ways were sat in her living
room. S**t. The younger man stepped
forward conceitedly; his stance
boasted of detriment…
power. “Caiden seems to
be expanding his business.
You see these
streets?” The sudden movement as his arms flung
out made her
whimper. The arrogant b*****d roared with
laughter. “They’re OURS. If Caiden doesn’t
leave the business...” He winked; lifted his
blazer to reveal the hidden
gun. Terror-stricken, Samina nodded. “Good girl. He
trained you well.” This time, the
King joined in.
She prayed for
their departure but it had only
begun. His majesty
finally arose, and with
him, the bat.
The vultures encircled her, ready to
feed. The younger
man approached and kicked
Samina off the
chair. She fell
beside the coffee
table simultaneously as it was smashed.
Shards flew all
over her like fireworks on the fourth of
July. It was too late for
shelter; a massive piece of
glass incinerated her leg. Samina cried out
as the pain
registered. She felt
blood trickle down diagonally,
as the numbness
began.
The mobster smirked, standing directly over her so she could see
his face change
with rage. The bat
knocked the wind
from her stomach
as he brought it down
infinite times.
She gasped desperately, whilst the excruciating
pain sent ripples through the body. Her
eyes began to perceive
his movements in slow
motion as he raised the
bat once more. Then
from behind came
Caiden. She was
saved. “CAIDEN!” she screamed, forcing out the
veins on her neck. “CAIDEN!!” The back of her throat was
sore from dryness. There was no rescue. She blinked.
There was no Caiden. The bat collided
against skin and pretty soon, there
was nothing but darkness. “Sammi... Wake up!” Letting out a moan, she managed to slightly
move and open
her eyes with effort.
She tried to
concentrate on the face above her but
had already recognized his voice.
Exhaling in relief,
he parted the
hair away from her
face and untied her
hands. She tried to
sit up but pain stung
throughout her abdomens. Blood gushed to her head, causing her to lie back down.
Her vision started to clear
as she looked
around. The kitchen was tattered, and everything
was thrown out
of place. The lamp
lay broken at her feet and the
wallpapers, torn. The
sofa was ripped
apart and their
TV, smashed. In the heart of
the chaos lay
Samina. And finally, she saw.
Leaned over her
was Caiden. Never, to that
day
had she witnessed his face so
full of terror.
But she saw
something else; they’d
gotten to him... purple
bruises on his
cheekbones, dark circles over his eyes, and
pain all over his
face. Yet, there was something that shrieked revenge. Red stains were smeared across his
cheeks and streaks
of blood rolled
down from his
forehead. Pale and
heavily breathing, he could
no longer sustain
himself. Assured Samina was fine,
he collapsed beside her. The thud jerked her mind
to awareness. Psyching herself up, she
ignored the ache that
gnawed into her
abdominals as she sat up straight. The dark
red blotches of blood
smudged across the
white carpet seemed surreal.
Her eyes darted all
over his body,
checking for injury. Carefully, she sat
him up in attempt to move
him
to the shredded sofa. That’s
when she noticed
the shards of glass engraved into his
back. Dragging his powerful
body across, she laid
him on his stomach. Stumbling, she ran
to the closet
for a first
aid kit and
rushed back. At
this point, Caiden
was her only
priority, regardless of her pain. She
dug for the
tweezers and got
to work. After picking
out each piece
of glass vigilantly, she bandaged him up. Caiden had taught
her how to handle injuries when he
was new to it all and would
come home with
it regularly. But as time passed,
he’d gained street
credibility and hadn’t been in
this state… ever. But that was never the option.
Paper chase was constantly on his mind and his
quickest way to fulfil his dream
was from the
dirty work. Bruised
and battered lay the
boy from the
concrete steps five years
ago. Slowly turning him onto
his back, she became
conscious of the trail of blood
to where he
laid before. Panic arose
from the pits of
her stomach rapidly when she
saw blood surging
from his leg. A bullet was
inside his thigh. Oh, good Lord! Praying he hadn’t lost too much blood, she
got to work
on the wound. Sweat
appeared on her forehead from having
to work as
fast and cautiously
as she could to stop
the bleeding whilst every
inch of movement
caused her anguish. Her persistence paid off. Finally
having removed it, she
bandaged him up to the best of
her ability. Relief washed over
her; he normally
underwent quick convalescence.
Clutching onto the torn sofa, she
tried to get up but fatigue took over.
She closed her eyes and finally,
rested. August 2015. “Cay, its been
five years already!” He was exhilarated
" not for
Samina, but for
the business. His mind
was occupied with notions
of being the
youngest to control
the streets in a matter of hours.
The day of assassination had come.
It was time
to eradicate. Caiden reminisced
to when the war
commenced. Kidnapped then tortured, he vowed for
vengeance. After he
escaped and made
his way back
home to unconscious
Samina, he planned
the termination of their
reign. She pleaded for him
to quit the business
and when he couldn’t bring himself to, he lied. Flourishing in the shadows was his
empire. Beaming with happiness on their
five year anniversary,
she was unaware Caiden’s mind had only
a single objective:
overthrowing the mobsters. It was perfectly planned. Caiden would be
King. Wrenching him from
the reverie, his work phone
rang. His subordinates
had lost surveillance
on the Mafia
King. He commanded
to begin the
search but they were
to only contact him in emergencies. It was his anniversary
after all. Caiden and Samina
walked out of the restaurant,
hand in hand, like
a normal couple. She smiled at
the thought of normality.
She had gotten her
Caiden back; the
business had lost. Or so she thought. The night was
dark; the sky,
pitch black. How else
could the stars
shine? Samina pointed out a star, the
smallest
in the sky. Her
faith always rested
with the underdog.
Suddenly, she stopped.
As he turned
to her, she leaped
up and embraced him. The
night was theirs
as she giggled
blissfully. “Caiden, I love…”
" the shrieking
of tires and
endless gunshots interrupted her. She grasped onto Caiden as
he pulled her
to safety. The air
vibrated as his BlackBerry rang. He
instantly knew his
men were calling
about having found
the Mafia King
and his heart
soared at the thought of dethroning him. Then sank,
in realization of his drenched hand. Samina whispered, “…you.” Panic stricken, he placed her
on the pavement
to see where
she’d been shot but
there was too
many to count. She coughed; a droplet
of blood flicked
onto his cheek. NO. His mind
refused to believe
this was what
it was. She
was going to be fine. Samina was NOT going
to die. He
was her protector;
there was no way in hell
she would die in his arms. Flames
engulfed the back of
his throat; it was on fire.
Then appeared a massive
lump, making it
hard to swallow.
He could actually
feel his heart
breaking. Thunder growled. He looked
up to plead
God not to take her
away, but was
silenced " the smallest dimmest star began to
glow brighter than the rest.
Promptly, clouds swarmed over the night
sky blocking the view of
Samina’s star. Before
his heart could
argue with reality,
the screeching returned. The pain
was quickly replaced. Anger. Fury. WRATH. The car hid
amongst the shadows. Although protection was too
late, he stood
before her. BANG " launched
a
shot from out of the night. The agonizing pain… it
hit him. He
dropped to his knees, one
hand over the
wound on his shoulder. From the
corner of his eye, he
saw Samina lay
still, shrivelled. There was no more pain;
he felt nothing but rage.
His body shook
with resentment, as if during convulsions. If I can just get a look of
their faces, I know who to kill next. But the car
was gone. He screamed, not for
his pain, but
in frustration " for failing. The car swerved
back in cockiness. This is your chance Caiden. Look at
their faces! They drew closer. Drenched in ferocity,
Caiden’s eyes fixated
on the faces beneath
the windshield. But he saw only silhouettes.
Focus, Caiden! The moonlight flickered, then disappeared
as soon as
it had come. The abyss of darkness
and pain enclosed
on him. His
heart ached but his
mind was prepared
for revenge. There would be no impunity. He had seen
them. Complacency. Recognized their faces.
Contempt. The driver and the
man with the
gun. The Right-Hand Man and
the Mafia King. His brother… and his
father. © 2010 Suzuki WritesAuthor's Note
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