The Earthy Moon

The Earthy Moon

A Poem by not a writer suvrat
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I know it has grammatical errors but please cmnt on it

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On a chilling night, with sky so clear,
When I lost hope and sat on terrace with tears,
A voice came from no where which startled me,
"what is letting your tears free"
First I thought it was my heart playing with my mind
But the voice was different in its own kind.
" I see you every night with that girl in lanes.
Your love relaxes my grief and pain"
I stood up and my eyes never believed my ears
It was the moon talking about my affairs.
" why are you intrestedin my life,
Our disagreements caused a strife"
I said as my mind still tried to figure what was going on.
"Well it's because love is something I lack since I was born"
Her voice got heavy as she answered me
I wasn't able to understand what was it meant to be.
On seeing me confused she spoke again
" We were made to give and not to gain"
Moon said trying to hide her pain.
The weather changed and it started raining
It felt like someone's tears were draining
" I don't know you much but I can say on thing
That it isn't fair what destiny is doing,
You are much more older than I am
You can see everything here, but I can't "
As I said this , her tears stopped
" I want to know your story",I started the talk
The sky became clear n her face became white
Stars also became curious and appeared more bright
"long ago when the Earth was made,
he also glowed but loneliness made his brightness fade
It was the reason for which I was born
Fully white and adorn
For many millenia we talked and talked,
Bring back the earth's glory which was lost.
I don't know when it happened,
For him my feelings strengthened
I forgot that I was merely a reason for life on earth
To huge problems I gave birth
We both were young and didn't knew it was wrong
And both fell in love and forgot where we belonged.
When we tried to become one
A curse upon us begun
For the Earth all life on it was changed
Which changed him in a variety that ranged
His glow was taken and was left in dark
He wasn't supported with even a spark
I was spotted black and all my beauty was taken
And by taking me away from him our love was shaken
For millenia I wasn't allowed to see his face,
For the millenia I cried and lost my grace.
Even the stars became sad on seeing my situation
And decided to an action.
They were ready to give their shine they had
This act even melted god
He made sun for earth to see
And allowed me to go round him until I wanted to be
Although I he will never know who am I
But his happy face fills me with joy"
Her story filled my eyes with tear
Not because I was sad but because I met the greatest lover.
The night came to an end and the sun showed up
I wiped my eyes and to a sup
Now I shall sing the greatest chronicle known
As the respect for love in me has grown.
#suvrat


© 2015 not a writer suvrat


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Added on January 6, 2015
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not a writer suvrat
not a writer suvrat

yamuna nagar, haryana, India



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