Is It?

Is It?

A Poem by Suvada

Is it wrong for her to feel the need to curl up next to him

and hope that all her nightmares will just go away?

Is it wrong for her to remember his touch?

Is it wrong for her to remember his smile, his laugh?

Is it wrong for her to remember the beating of his heart?

Is it wrong for her to want to be close to him again?

All of this seems like its only making her miss him more..

But is it wrong to say she doesn't want to miss him.

Is it wrong to say she’s trying to push it all away?

But is it wrong to say that it’s not working..


Is any of it wrong?

Or is it just normal..


Is it normal to miss someone’s presence?

Is it normal to miss everything about them?

Is it normal to miss the smile they gave you?

Is it normal to miss the laugh they got out of you?

Is it normal to miss the happiness you use to feel?

Is it normal to be afraid?

Is it normal to feel regret?

Is it normal to pretend like nothing ever happened?



Well is it?

Or is it not?

© 2015 Suvada


Author's Note

Suvada
Just thought I could get a few questions out of my head but I hope you guys enjoy it please comment I didn't think this poem would consist of only questions but it did. I hope you guys enjoy it :)

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to me this sounds like this girl misses him and she cant forget all the little things she use to love about their relationship. I don't know if this is about you or not, but I believe it is perfectly normal to miss someone you cared about so much. I don't know the reasoning for the split but if it s meant to be she should talk to him and hopefully he will feel the same way. I am currently in a long distance relationship and I know that I miss her presence and her smile and all the things we use to do together.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i would love to answer your questions, but I am abnormal so I can't answer that for you. I guess everyone would answer with affirmative yes but I don't believe in love....hopefully you will the answers that you seek.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Is it normal to be afraid?
Is it normal to feel regret?
Is it normal to pretend like nothing ever happened?"
The questions of love. I like the old wise saying. Better to love and lost than to never had loved. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. I like the poetry that asked questions.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i think it is completely normal. honestly i still feel the exact way about a close friend of mine.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh none of them are wrong! None of those questions are wrong at all Suvada! And this poem of yours really is touching... Many of us have such questions in our minds but when we read them like this, it really pierces the heart.... I can tell that this is a beautifully written and painful piece. Thanks for sharing.... :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

None are wrong - they are achingly natural
None are abnormal - they are painfully real

Theres longing here and doubt that love should hurt so much - a side of Love that isnt visited much.
Thank you Suvada

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marvelous!! I love to think and ask questions xD
I like you're questions in this piece. Nice work!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to me this sounds like this girl misses him and she cant forget all the little things she use to love about their relationship. I don't know if this is about you or not, but I believe it is perfectly normal to miss someone you cared about so much. I don't know the reasoning for the split but if it s meant to be she should talk to him and hopefully he will feel the same way. I am currently in a long distance relationship and I know that I miss her presence and her smile and all the things we use to do together.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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