Unknown

The sky is dark, 

the moon is shinning bright, 

the howl is nice and loud, 

the wind is cold and dark, 

I walked into the path of trees.

I hear a whisper, 

I turn around.

I took a deep breath, 

turned my back, 

and continued walking again.

I hear the whisper again, 

it was closer, 

but the words weren't clear.

I turn all the way around, 

scared for my life, 

like someones just watching me.

Into the darkness 

I saw a figure 

I thought it was just my imagination

but the words came through my ears, 

'you're mine'

Goosebumps crawled throughout my whole body.

I was struggling to even speak, 

the words 'you're mine' just kept repeating 

over and over again in my head.

Finally I said 'Who's there? '

I hear nothing from his mouth, 

but through my mind went, 

'You know who I am, you're mine'

I didn't know if it was real 

or if I was just crazy.

I closed my eyes, felt a cold breeze.

I opened my eyes, the shadow was gone

and so were the words..

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

The three poems I read have the feel of a story. Could make chapters and connect. I like how you led to the very good ending.
"I closed my eyes, felt a cold breeze.
I opened my eyes, the shadow was gone
and so were the words."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote