The Great Tower's Bridge

This was written in less than a minute when I traveled to London and saw Tower Bridge open up for a giant boat to pass. Very very spontaneous and nonsensical but cute nonetheless! (I think)

The small little moat

And the big little boat

Passing through Tower Bridge,

It opens up wide and goes in

Not through the side, but through the middle ridge.

On far right therein lies

The great London Bridge whose name

Echoes world wide with the song,

But great London Bridge holds not

A candle to Tower Bridge,

for its smooth, grey demeanours aren't that strong.

The great London Bridge has fallen

And its beauty has befallen with,

Now left with nothing that

Can overshadow the

Great tower's

Bridge.

Author's Note

written: July 2024

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

Beautifully written poem. Loved it

[suuyuwriteyunu]

thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words :)