"I'm so proud of you"

"I'm so proud of you"

A Poem by suuyuwriteyunu

"I'm so proud of you"
I take my first steps. I call my first words. I cook my first dish. I eat my first meal.
"I'm so proud of you"
I'm such a good girl. I'm a good girl. I love my friends. I love myself. I love my grades.
"I'm so proud of you"
I have goals. I have hobbies. I don't get sick. I'm not tired.
"I'm so proud of you"
I'm fun. I'm cool. I'm cold. I'm shivering. I'm shaking. The air blows over me but I'm still loved. I'm still cool. I'm still good.
"I'm so proud of you"
I'm still loved. I'm still liked. I'm still shivering, shaking, vomitting. I'm still loved. I'm still liked.
"I'm so proud of you"
I'm still getting good grades. I'm on the ground. I'm still a good girl. I'm breaking. I'm still perfect. I'm struggling. I'm sick. I need help.
perfect, perfect, I'm still perfect.
"I'm so proud of you"
perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, perfect, per

© 2024 suuyuwriteyunu


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suuyuwriteyunu
written: June 2024

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honey i don't know what's going on but i'm so proud of you for even posting this and you're still perfect and always will be. keep going

Posted 1 Month Ago


suuyuwriteyunu

1 Month Ago

thank you so much 🥹😭🤍

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Added on July 28, 2024
Last Updated on July 28, 2024
Tags: expectations, pressure, depression, overwhelming, poem, dark, twisted, perfection

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suuyuwriteyunu

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