Starting to Sink

Starting to Sink

A Poem by Yours Truly

What we could've had,
I'll never really know,
Sometimes it makes me sad,
But I try not to let it show

I guess something got you thinking,
You should just let go of me,
Just let me start sinking,
No reason more to think about me

But now your trying to call,
And it's hurting me more,
Because I gave you my all,
But for so long was just ignored

That even though I'm feeling low,
My lesson has been learned,
That you never really know,
If your just going to be burned

© 2014 Yours Truly


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Yours Truly
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Don't answer the phone ( : O )

Posted 10 Years Ago


Seconds chances never work. I know. I gave a few woman, a third. Old thoughts and pain won't leave you.
"But now your trying to call,
And it's hurting me more,
Because I gave you my all,
But for so long was just ignored"
Sometimes best to say thank you and leave me alone. I like the poem. I learn when someone wants a second chance. I run for the door. A very good poem. You made me think again. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem is just so so so true and anyone who has ever had there heart broken will see that. I have been the person to ignore the call when all you want to do is hear that voice tell you it was all a mistake and I have been the person calling who realized everything to late. That rhyme was unintentional...but I really felt this poem and I love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yours Truly

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it and exactly. you understand completely how I was feeling when it just spille.. read more
Your poetry is very good, I think the vein of poignancy in it makes it even stronger, I also know that somewhere along your life line, you will find your own pages of love and happiness, meanwhile, well done for writing as you do, such a good escape valve from the perils of love...Keith.

Posted 10 Years Ago


"I'm feeling low,
My lesson has been learned,
That you never really know,
If your just going to be burned"

A splendid read and write...Thank you for sharing...:).................


Posted 10 Years Ago


Yours Truly

10 Years Ago

Just how I was kinda feeling, thank you for your kind review :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
That even though I'm feeling low,
My lesson has been learned,
That you never really know,
If your just going to be burned

I think this sums it up well but you shouldn't start something expecting to get burned, or it's doomed from the start. Keep one eye open though... :)
Nice one, enjoyed reading. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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