Feeling Small

Feeling Small

A Poem by Yours Truly

It's a brand new day,
but yet, 
things are the same way,
I try my best to ignore,
but how can I?
when it happens more and more,
I wish I could just go to sleep,
and all the things you want to say,
you can keep,
to yourself, so I don't have to hear,
the things I know your going to say,
I take hits from everyone,
sometimes I just want to be done,
tired of it all,
feeling like a little girl,
helpless,
small.

© 2013 Yours Truly


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I like the way you expressed your emotion. I like the description leading to the strong ending. No-one like to feel helpless and small. I like the internal thought leading to the strong ending. I enjoyed the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


I wake up like this most days, feeling that everything is going to just be the same as yesterday and having to go through it. Like a routine. No one ever said life was going to be easy for any of us, but it's up to us to make the best of it in any way that we can. Some days may beat you down into the ground, deep into the dirt, but all we can do is get up and brush the dirt off. Continue on, push on and wait for the next day. We can't wait around and wait for others to tell us how to live our lives, we have to be our own person, find our own happiness and be who we are, no matter what may happen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


How human you sound here...
I could feel your anguish....
You expressed yourself well...it makes it potent.

Enjoyed this.
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


As they say, Rome wasn't built in a day. It takes time for things to get better, but just as long as you have hope and patience, they will :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Yours Truly

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review

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