My Feelings

Sometimes I wish I could disappear,
I'm not sure where I would go,
But I don't think anybody would care,
I'm just tired of watching the minutes tick by slow,

Sometimes I feel like I'd be better off dead,
No matter how hard I try,
I can't seem to get these feelings out of my head,
Wouldn't it be easier to just say goodbye?

Sometimes my heart feels like it's about to burst,
Maybe I'd be better off lying in a hearse,
I've been so angry and in so much pain,
I'm tired of feeling like I'm going insane,

I always try to be there for you,
But what about when I need you here for me?
I try to do everything I can do,
Can't you see,
That my feelings matter too

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

If only there was a magical scale that would guarantee equal love.
Some valid feelings here that are shared by all at sometime or another.
I enjoyed your write..and do indeed understand ..you captured and proclaimed your feelings well.

Scott

[I Am Svetlana]

This describes me just perfectly! Honestly, I know each of these feelings all too well. Depression can always make us think certain and impossible things, twisting them around in our minds to make us seem like they are real and possible. It brings us down, pushes us to our breaking point. But we must remember who we are and why we are still here, alive. A lot of people struggle with thoughts like these everyday and somehow are able to see light in a new day, just hanging on with only hope in their hearts. I feel like this a lot and it's nothing easy to go through, but we only can really depend on ourselves to get through these dark times when we know others won't be able to be there for us every minute.

[Yours Truly]

Yes it can and yeah it's not always easy to stop the thoughts though and see the light like you say but your right, you really can only depend on yourself to get through and out of hard times, I am starting to realize this myself

[Laura Harrison]

Very emotional and sad. I see a lot of myself in this poem.

[Yours Truly]

Thank you for sharing, just how I have been feeling a lot lately.

[Emrick]

I like how emotional this poem is.
" Wake up and stand out tall.You were made in the image of G-d.Broken hearts,pain and sadness wasn't meant for us. Stand up and keep moving.

[Yours Truly]

Thank you for your kind words and your reviews, i do appreciate your positive thoughts

[Neon]

I hate seeing someone as beautiful as you feel 'Alone' ..

Anyway, your feelings're worthy and the emotions of yours are flickering like a light into the words for probing the place to live into the depth of the someone's heart peacefully with some happiness for life.
Nice poem!

[Yours Truly]

Yes that's just I want. thank you for your review