Rustling sound of leaves whispers in my ears Amidst the darkness of night and plenty of fears When wind silently sways them in the air A serene breeze flows through my untangled hair Mesmerizing touch of the whiff so lifeless Enthralls my mind with its comfort and peacefulness Breezy lilt makes the disturbing thoughts vanish Leaving behind a trail of bliss that I wish to cherish A rhythm so comforting, a flow so undulating Sways my blissful heart with a new song to sing
"Enthralls my mind with its comfort and peacefulness
Breezy lilt makes the disturbing thoughts vanish
Leaving behind a trail of bliss that I wish to cherish"
You are a amazing writer. Above lines were my favorite. Good to know bliss and cherish the good places and memories. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thanks Coyote :) Appreciate your valuable review :)
Yes...very true..we as humans always seek .. read moreThanks Coyote :) Appreciate your valuable review :)
Yes...very true..we as humans always seek comfort in good old memories :)
Thanks Vidya...Really appreciate your review :) Glad to know that you liked it...
Blessingsread moreThanks Vidya...Really appreciate your review :) Glad to know that you liked it...
Blessings
Sue
11 Years Ago
you are welcome and i will read more and feel free to read my work and say something.