Enthralling Wind

Enthralling Wind

A Poem by susmitadas

Rustling sound of leaves whispers in my ears
Amidst the darkness of night and plenty of fears
When wind silently sways them in the air
A serene breeze flows through my untangled hair
Mesmerizing touch of the whiff so lifeless
Enthralls my mind with its comfort and peacefulness
Breezy lilt makes the disturbing thoughts vanish 
Leaving behind a trail of bliss that I wish to cherish
A rhythm so comforting, a flow so undulating
Sways my blissful heart with a new song to sing
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© 2013 susmitadas


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"Enthralls my mind with its comfort and peacefulness
Breezy lilt makes the disturbing thoughts vanish
Leaving behind a trail of bliss that I wish to cherish"
You are a amazing writer. Above lines were my favorite. Good to know bliss and cherish the good places and memories. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


susmitadas

11 Years Ago

Thanks Coyote :) Appreciate your valuable review :)
Yes...very true..we as humans always seek .. read more
Very beautiful lines ,very lovely poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


susmitadas

11 Years Ago

Thanks Vidya...Really appreciate your review :) Glad to know that you liked it...
Blessingsread more
Vidya Bacchus

11 Years Ago

you are welcome and i will read more and feel free to read my work and say something.
susmitadas

11 Years Ago

sure..I would love to read ur work :)

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