Chapter 2: The Nightmare Begins

Chapter 2: The Nightmare Begins

A Chapter by Adele Potter
"

Zeke, Spencer, and Logan come up with a "great" idea.

"

Still Tuesday, July 2

10:43 PM


Famous last words.


I am currently sitting in the back seat of Logan's car next to Spencer, while Zeke is sitting next to Logan. And we are headed across the country.


To California.


The LONGEST WAY POSSIBLE.


Let me explain.


"Hey, Logan," said Spencer, combing some of his dark brown hair out of his eyes, as we all watched a horror movie on 

TV.


"Yeah?"


"Where's Alice? We could invite her over."


"Augh, she's in Freeing, California with her family right now," Logan sighed.


Zeke raised his eyebrows. "So, how long are your parents out of town?"


"Three weeks," he said.


"Suppose we paid her a visit?"


"No," I said. "No, no, no, no, no!"


"Hmm…" said Logan, stroking his chin.


"Bro," I said. "You're not actually taking this seriously, are you?"


"Z, Spence," he said, grinning. "Call your parents. Tell them you're spending the week here."


"Ohhhhh, you're taking it seriously…"


11:12 PM


So, after they got that smoothed out, Logan made me pack a week's worth of clothes in my bag. "What about food?" I asked.


"Oh, relax, Luna. We can stop at fast food places and stuff," he said.


"So, we're going to California just so you can see your slu�" girlfriend?"


"Yep."


Midnight


Unfortunately, the boys had answers for all of my questions.


Where will we sleep?

Spencer: In the car, duh.


How will we pay for gas and stuff?

Zeke: Spencer's loaded, and Logan and I have jobs.


Are you sure Alice will be very happy to have us show up unexpectedly?

Logan: Oh come on! You know how much Alice loves me!


Are you crazy?!

Logan: Possibly.



© 2011 Adele Potter


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LOL i love this chapter hehheh its funny and cool and stuff. Definatly more character development and stuff here, and i like the humor intermixed.
I like Logans personality as the silly big brother, thinks its cool. there is always room in the story for a silly big brother (:
But this book is good. like it alot. You better keep writing it or else... i'll think of saomehting. i've seen my fair share of fenominal books go down the drain cuz the author doesn't continue them.

But, like i said when reviewing the previous chapter, you are a talented writer with a unique writing style. I enjoy your writing because its always fine to have a good laugh.

Happy Writing!!!
Fairy Blue

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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LOL i love this chapter hehheh its funny and cool and stuff. Definatly more character development and stuff here, and i like the humor intermixed.
I like Logans personality as the silly big brother, thinks its cool. there is always room in the story for a silly big brother (:
But this book is good. like it alot. You better keep writing it or else... i'll think of saomehting. i've seen my fair share of fenominal books go down the drain cuz the author doesn't continue them.

But, like i said when reviewing the previous chapter, you are a talented writer with a unique writing style. I enjoy your writing because its always fine to have a good laugh.

Happy Writing!!!
Fairy Blue

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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