B-day gift,"POETRY".

"When the luminosity of comet glitters,
a perspective, akin to your soul gets born."
"A phenom like you,with gusto and zeal,
is ablazed to smite my strife and get them veiled.

"The colleagues proclaim you as managing crystal,
 and for me, your statue is to be placed on heart's pedestal."
"It's the band that's acknowledged by nature,
 for which you stand as a reverred creature."
 
"You are a big dent to my obstacles,
which may whip me with their tentacles."
"Don't beckon these words as my gratitude.
 as your greatness makes it your attitude."

"This trivial sonnet deserves no spot,
 but still,certify this as a gift from your tiny tot.

Author's Note

DON'T MIND OVER THE WORD REVERRED {Incorrect ENGLISH}. It means respect. PLEASE DO RATE IT IF YOU LIKED IT. Today is the B-day of my father.

Reviews

[dw817]

Sunny sonnet it is. Definitely rhyming some very difficult and amazing words. You mentioned Birthday - but no cake ? :)

[Tom]

Some terrific metaphoric lines within this honourable homily !

Very touching and creative !

[poetdoug]

I love this lovely Sonnet--first one I've read for a Birthday---that makes it that much more special my friend.

[sushobhan]

It's too scrumptious when a legend like you reviews anyone

[poetdoug]

You are so kind my talented friend

[L.Edward]

Great piece. I can deeply connect with this imagery. On an Esoteric level, you could consider a more literal truth to this symbolism. What you describe could serve as a metaphor for the energetic threads that develop between people and objects. As a shamanic healer I have worked with such karmically binding energy "cords" for myself and others.

[Frieda P]

Awe inspiring, a lovely honor in his name, hope your father appreciated this sweet tribute for his birthday.

[sushobhan]

Thank ya' kind woman. Your words were like the "Greek crown of leaves".

[Frieda P]

How lovely of you to say, it was my pleasure, well deserved.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful birthday gift of words. Splendid.

[sushobhan]

Thanks for viewing. With your benevolent visit, it would me more special for me to take pride in what i penned. You're an awesome personality.....

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. That is an honor...You are welcome...:)

[sushobhan]

Thanks for laying your golden layer of review on the poem. You're an awesome personality.

[Sami Khalil]

You too...Thank you kindly...:)

[Eddie Phillips]

It is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it a lot. You have a gift for poetic construction. Not a skill set that is abundant in every poet.

[sushobhan]

I was infiltrated with merriment to get that. What an honor to be reviewed by a guy like you.

[Layni LaCroix]

You did awesomely! I really, really liked the myriad of ample words. It provides reason to invoke thought and is cute as well. ^^

[sushobhan]

Thanks for your painstaking visit. This was an inspirational review.

[Layni LaCroix]

You just keep doing your thing, okay?

[Mercia74]

That's brilliant. Your command of language is amazing, such lovely words! And to write something like that for your Dad is lovely. Really enjoyed it, thank you :)

[sushobhan]

Hats off to you for your review. Such poignant remarks are like a new poem to me.

[Mercia74]

keep at it!