"The obscenity of posterity."

"The obscenity of posterity."

A Poem by sushobhan
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Based on the current trends of being depraved, this poem reflects a sharp prospective of what is to come.

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Posterity will find it better to ask,
Rather than to divulge the unmasked?
{For them,this two lined phrase}:
"Will the ore ever know it's core?
that it may bear the gold!'

Will your heart not fear to shed the crust of tears?
for the melancholious guy who might be your near.

Don't you feel abashed?
when you seek exoneration that you trash.

Who is your perspective of NOBILITY?
The prate who engenders humor out of antiquity!

Who might be your love?
that would get one day,"The wailing on your nerves".

For the cessation,I'll mark annihilation to which you owe tribute.
as you,"The kleptomaniac of your own souls" are left with no attribute.

© 2013 sushobhan


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Had to read this through a few times to get the full feel for it....

Who is your perspective of NOBILITY?
The prate who engenders humor out of antiquity!

I think those two lines sum it up nicely....

Tripped over the line 'for the melancholious guy who might be your near' but as I reread it again, I got the gist of your meaning. Nicely pen'd.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Who might be my love ? That is a crystal pistol with glass bullets and a difficult one to answer. As I have learned in life you are worse off being alone rather than being with someone who loves you that you hate, especially as the years start to go by.

Please consider ...


Posted 11 Years Ago


it's a very interesting poem sushobhan and much to the point of a cry against a culture and personal"depravity". we humans are out of tune with each other and our world and as such will find it difficult to see our and others "golden core"' so lets have a revolt against s such "depravity". liked your poem sushobhan. thanks for sharing. ---redzone

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow your a classy writer. I dig this unique blend of romance and sprinklings of modern word usage. Great clincher too. "The Kleptomaniac of our own souls" (by the inverted commas I guess you felt the impact of this too.


Posted 11 Years Ago


sushobhan

11 Years Ago

My gratitude would be trivial for your review. Honorable poet!!!!
L.Edward

11 Years Ago

The honour is all yours for a great creative work!
A golden write. Thank you for sharing this wonderful one...:)

"Who might be your love?
that would get one day,"The wailing on your nerves".


Posted 11 Years Ago


sushobhan

11 Years Ago

It's a big honor that a golden goose like you reviews anyone's work.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Wow. Thank you so much for the honor...:)

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