"Turbo skates for a legend"

A Poem by sushobhan

Here is my bonafide conviction regarding the legends whose fame turn them immortalized in the eyes of mundanes like us. They're meticulous,full of acumency and bear proclivity to their profession.

"What it takes to be a legend,
is just an approach to make amends.
Stop improvising your fellow's fate,
to rejuvenate your life with new skates.
Make an acquaintance with mistakes,
to avoid your skates to get into stake.
Purchase it's fuel with gratitude to painstaking hearts.
to renovate your skates to be smart.
Never get the drops of rain to get your skating track too slippery,......[Rain implies pleasure.}
or you will make a cessation of being a mercenary.
Adjust your skate's taste to the fluctuating turns,
or the decayed fuel is enough to get you burnt.
Lay your eagle-casted eyes on every schism......
and get the nitro with your optimism.
Don't get your rivals blurred,
or your legendary epic would get suffered.

"Win the adrenaline by making a charity show,
to get the shuttle to blow.
And find your heart with unique glow
summoned by acclamation of nature's bow."

"AND HERE YOU ARE, A CARVED OUT PERSPECTIVE OF A PHENOM."

© 2013 sushobhan

Author's Note

I have tried to make it fluidic by not flaunting my vocab. Hope it gets you to the ladders of success of which you're an integral part.

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Sami Khalil

I give you a flying and energy boost power for this wonderful poem... Very intersting indeed...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

The moment i came in touch with the poem of yours, I grasped what true poetry is all about. You are .. read more

11 Years Ago

What an honor indeed. What a beautiful soul...Thank you kindly...:)

L.Edward

Yes, rocket skates rule! On a number of levels. Nitro is for optimism: Absolutely. My cousin does roller- derby, so I get very amped about skates in general.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review as the fact that your review will rule over my inspiration.

11 Years Ago

My pleasure. It's wonderful having the chance to hang with your stuff. Please keep me posted. Warmes.. read more

dw817

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Turbo Skates ? Don't you mean Rocket Boots like what Fi uses to travel around with ? :)

But yes, when I was young, my hero was Felix The Cat. Then Poindexter. As I got older it became Superman. I got older it was Batman, older still, it was Columbo, older still I realize the greatest heroes of all are the one who raised me, my Mom and Dad.

What it takes to be a legend ? A teacher, and my parents definitely were.